Rough Cut - Evaluation

I think overall, the rough cut proves to be quite good as the scenes were shot quite well and the edits look quite seamless but there is room for improvement. I think that the sound becomes draggy towards the end of the two minutes as well as the lighting. I think that the lighting could have been improved but with the clips that we have, the storyline looks very believable. My favourite parts are the scenes where Leah (Senis) shows quirky yet believable reactions despite it not being planned. I think it adds character to the opening scene. Also, i really like the font, colour and the simplicity of the credits as it makes it look professional. I also like where the credits have been placed as it frames the shots quite nicely. I also think in order to improve for the future, we should consider the timing of each shot so there is space for more tight edits. Overall, I think it's pretty good but there are things that need to be changed to  create a better film.