Rough Cut - Evaluation

I believe that overall our rough cut Is looking good and sound good. As the costume designer I like what the characters are wearing. I like the song however it just gets boring after a while therefore it should be changed. I personally don't like the scene where Cain is shaking hands with Lea because there's a bin just underneath them and it does not look attractive at all. To add to this teenagers don't really shake hands. The action taken in that scene is unrealistic therefore the action needs to be just taken out. The tittle sequence could also be framed in a better way. Apart from that  I like the fact that we included a range of camera shots taking from different angles leaving our rough cut looking diverse and eye catching already. With more improvements on it everyone will love it the final cut.