- MUSIC : A much more dynamic music track would reduce lack of drawing the audience in
- TITLE SEQUENCE (appearance) : Change font, colour and case where appropriate and suitable
- EDITING (tighter) - Add and reduce to shots for better match cuts.
- SCENE CUTS (shaking hands/introduction) : this deems as unnecessary as this scene is quite unrealistic and can end much more interestingly if cut earlier.
Thankfully, we do not need to re-film any scenes as the feedback indicated that we just need to make the editing tighter and change the length of some of the shots we already have.
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